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A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Psychotropic on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:23 pm

The night-lamps flicker with the chilling breeze, the dying yellow light dancing upon the cobbled streets. Aside from the wary citizens of the night, few roam the paths in the quiet city at this hour. Those that do walk with either swagger or shudder-- neither can be trusted.

Heavy paws press against the cool stone ground, making no more than a leaves' hush as they pass over the paved roads. Each weighty footfall is matched beat for half-beat to a young waif, mid-twenties, fresh and supple. He glances back over his scarfed shoulder; his large, tapered ears tucked against his head snugly by a thick fleece hat. Nothing of high suspect is seen. Though, as the waif turns his head, his unseen stalker bursts forth from the darkness-- a great leupak, white and bruise-colored, lunges at the helpless waif, it's horrifically striped tongueclaw extended and dripping with white venom.
He makes his landing, pressing a thick paw to the waif's jugular and latching the tongueclaw on the soft underside of his arm. The waif shudders as a blast of hot, rancid breath slaps him in the face. Sharp claws pierce flesh deep and draw blood from the main artery beneath, the little humanoid squirms fruitlessly in terror in realizing the leupak's malevolent motives. Blood is siphoned from the waif until he is hardly more than a lightweight shell of bone and spent tissue. The ghostly leupak glows with his feast and tucks into a hole in a tight alleyway, making an effortless escape.


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Name: Necro
Section Notes: A Shardborne leupak not known to follow by typical feeding standards, Necro has been rumored to have a strict blood-diet, though he does enjoy many other types of food.

The Facet
Concept: An indiscreet oval-shaped gemstone-like facet the color of ice.
Facet Type: Default facet
Facet Power: Distortion Facet
Section Notes: When Necro's venom* doesn't work to muddle the mind of prey, he uses his facet. He does this sparingly, though, for it requires a large amount of energy.

Cosmetic Basics
Size: A very large leupak, Necro comes at about 3'6'' tall at the shoulder, 12' long from snout to tail-tip.
Section Notes: He also can stand on his hind legs for a more formidable appearance. He cannot walk as such, however, and cannot maintain this position for very long.

Body
Body Type: Quite muscular, his size fluctuates from time to time depending on when he has last fed.
Ear Type: Long ears, slightly round tip. Ears have slight 'cut' midway down the outside edges, giving a mild protrusion.
Skin Type: Small scales, typical rubbery body.
Body Color/Pattern: Pinkish-iridescent white with simple gray pattern from neck to tail-tips.
Underbelly Color/Pattern: Light burgundy, ribbed but soft.
Eye Type/Color: Icy blue eye color, slitted pupils.
Extra Accent Colors : Tongueclaw is dark-gray and red-- striped. His paws are alternately colored white-gray, though all of his pawpads maintain the same dark-gray tone.
Mutations: Not quite a mutation, Necro's tail is forked at the tip.

*Venom Mods: Venom contains a formidable level of nitrous oxide and may render victims of a bite/injection quite delirious.
Last edited by Psychotropic on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:02 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Psychotropic on Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:40 pm

Feel free to comment on this.
My leupak is a bit boring, I feel, and he doesn't have much of a personality.

Also, if you comment substantially on mine, I'll give my review of yours (if you have one). I don't mind :)
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Comix on Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:04 pm

The excerpt above is startlingly well-written, thus making it a very good -though shudder-inducing -read! I, personally, really like your leupak's design, it is simple yet very original. Same goes for his markings.
As for his refsheet, it's an amazing piece of artwork, and I'd really love to see more leupak drawings from you! ^^
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Psychotropic on Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:41 am

Comix wrote:The excerpt above is startlingly well-written, thus making it a very good -though shudder-inducing -read! I, personally, really like your leupak's design, it is simple yet very original. Same goes for his markings.
As for his refsheet, it's an amazing piece of artwork, and I'd really love to see more leupak drawings from you! ^^


Thank you, I like to write in my free time and used to participate in the forum Role-Playing. Nobody was interested in what I had to say though *self-pity*
All wallowing aside, thank you very much :) I had planned to illustrate it with a short comic, but never got to it.
Thank you again, on complimenting my design. It actually started out like this a long time ago: http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2052074/
Simplified it a little and made him less Elton John, ahaha.
I actually don't draw as often as I would like. If you want to see more art from me I'm on DeviantArt.
http://psychotropicfox.deviantart.com/
Sorry for advertising myself ^^;
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Doodle_Bug on Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:49 am

I think Necro is far from boring! xD

He looks absolutely nightmarish. Haha. I mean that in a good way of course. I'd hate to end up face to face, or er... face to toungleclaw in a dark alley with him. I really like his design and especially the colorful toungeclaw against his not so colorful body. The concept art is very nice as well. It really helps me to get a good picture of him. I can't wait to see any new Leupaks you might happen to create in the future!
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Kiwiana on Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:18 am

His picture is awesome! Expecially his face on your avatar reminds me of a pitbull lol XD Very cool looking^^ Wouldn't wanna meet him when he's in a bad mood ;)
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Psychotropic on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:58 pm

I'm glad that you guys like the concept art. :3 I was going for a more mad look for him.
I want him to be reminiscent of death.

Quick questions for anybody reading this:
What color(s) do you think of when you hear the words NUMB or RANCID?
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Doodle_Bug on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:18 pm

With NUMB I'd think a pale white perhaps? Almost a pale sickly looking color.
For RANCID I would maybe see brown and green maybe a rotten-looking combo.
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Ymber on Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:01 pm

Numb: Black and silver, or washed out grays and earthy pastel colors (pale browns/greens/etc).
Rancid: Maroon, burgundy, inky flesh tones, or varying shades of green - olive, lime, swampy greens & black/gray.


Your design is amazing, I adore the artwork. :) He seems like an interesting character to me.
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Saloiq on Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:48 pm

NUMB: Your leupak's colors D:
RANCID: There are no colors for it. Maybe a mix of a vivid purple-dull orange?
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Re: A Gluttonous Demon

Postby Psychotropic on Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:20 pm

Thanks for the input, guys, I was just trying to find a good alternate color for Necro's venom, because people keep making raunchy remarks, haha....

By the way, DoodleBug, is your avatar from 9? It reminds me of the Cat beast.
It also is exactly how I picture Necro in the passage above haha.
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